Personally,
I think the melodies are way too soft as other people have said. Not much going on, louder, more action is needed. Good try though.
Constructive criticism only please.
I want to improve.
Personally,
I think the melodies are way too soft as other people have said. Not much going on, louder, more action is needed. Good try though.
Wow old song, but thanks.
I have GREATLY improved since this. You should check it out lol
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.