This is nice
you should try to add a version with the vocals and see what people like better
By the way i'm easily impressed!
Now has bass, drums with a shortened solo. Still sounds incomplete after going back and listening, may redo this one more time.
edit: removed my vocals as it took away from the song. I need a good singer haha. Here's the lyrics though for those who wanna know or would like to sing it for me...
(As soon as guitar starts)
Growing up you were always there
my one true friend til the end
Every where I wanted you to be,
you didn't care how, you'd help me.
Years go by, you're a different man now
grew into one you ain't like me.
Who you are now, I don't know
maybe you're just who I use to be.
Chorus:
who I am is what I've become
some one born anew
I'm a new man, born out of hate
hate for those like you
How do you like me now that Im not
who I use to be
Verse 2:
I met this girl who became my world
gave me my own family
She was the best I could hope for
she was a dream come true
then things began to change
and she became someone new
the things I felt, went out the door
and me and her were through.
Chorus 2:
who I am is what I've become
some one born anew
I'm a new man, born out of hate
hate for those like you
How do you like me now that Im not
who I use to be
This is nice
you should try to add a version with the vocals and see what people like better
By the way i'm easily impressed!
There is an unfinished version earlier on my account. You can listen there, personally, it would probably be good if someone who could sing sang the song.
^_^
NICE NICE.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.