I AM FROM THE FUTURE, HELL HUMAN OF 2003 HOW ARE YOU DOING TODAY, WE TALK IN MEMES AND TALK ABOUT BLEACH AND OTHERS LIKE THAT, HOW IS YOUR DAY?
Well the audio track on this seems too low in "SOUND" and i guess its more of a loop then anything else as its too short, so these are two things you could do to spice it up, make the volume louder, and add more content like differant sounding instraments, you do have the right track with the fast paced style, just needs more to it for it to have any real results, anyways good luck.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the volume abit louder, and add more to the sound like differant instraments.
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