Here it goes.
I'll start with what I liked: the melodies were very nice.
Now what to improve on: Correct me if I'm wrong but you were using premade arps and gate sequences for the melodies. Try making your own and if you have trouble listen to some and derive your own from that...but if you did make them, then good for you! Also, the drums were off beat as hell in the beginning during the gated part. Make sure you have your timing correct for all your instruments. Also the sub was decent, but the snare at the end was just bad sounding and overall the drums were bland. Try jazzing them up a bit with a filter or using a multiband compressor. Also think about adding some cymbals too. An easy and widely used beat is a 4 on the floor kick or sub with a snare or clap on the off beat. Then use a closed and open hi hat to get a ta ta ts ta ta ts sound...where the ta is the closed hi hat and the ts is the open.
Anway keep playing around with the program and I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.