Very nice! Creative in many ways! I cant wait to hear the ones with the instruments you chose!
the part that comes in at 0:50 or so, flute or clarinet-type synth, would sound more true to the title of the piece as a trumpet, or other bright horn-synth.
other than that your instrumentation is fairly good, clear, stuff.
Very Good Indeed
I for one enjoyed this song. It's a great Techno song, and even though it's not a loop it does loop quite well. It did seem a bit repetitive, but you have to consider that this could be used in a flash movie or game which makes the repetition actually good. All in all you did great work here and you seem like a person I could listen to more often. Kudos.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.