at 00:30 to 1:00 my ears hear it at a kind of styrofoamy effect,you could have not used that,itwould have changed my vote,and my opinion,but pretty good!
the lyrics start a bit late, but i still liked it :D !!!
nice but only 1 bad thing
u have the lyrics in there but they come to late into the song
but other ways good
Good I Suppose...
The first thing I realized is that I noticed was that your mixed the original track up a bit. I guess that would make it a remix. I thought that this would be a tad bit more original than what you have right here.
Good thing is, it's a nice song and it's cool that you chose to do a remix on this for that contest. Very catchy too and you made it your own (I think) so that's a plus. It's long too. Everyone nowadays likes long tracks so good job on that!
What I don't like is the fact that you made it repetative. It took like 4 measures or whatever you have in your program for the beat to change up. I didn't really like waiting. :/ If you could add more variation to the track to keep my attention then that would make this an excellent remix. And if you added a lot more stuff of your own into the track it would be cool. I don't have the original so I can't tell what changes you made. I feel that you did a good job from what I know and hope to see... <_< >_> Less of this kind of submission! If you did do a remix, I'd like it to be a lot more you and less another artist. You know what I mean?
Well, you got my two cents on this. Do what you will with it. I'll keep checking up on you to see how much you're improving. ;)
thank you for checking it out! i did change the song alot, but i think i could add more. thanks very much! i'll repost an updated version soon!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.