I'm liking it

The introduction is very good, some volume levels could be slightly adjusted, but thats not a major problem, what you need to work on is a different main body for the song, the way it sounded was that it was leading into a main section where a more powerful beat and perhaps a new melody was going to enter or it was going to be an anti climax where it would go quieter with just the drum beat and bass so that a rapper could jump in, one of these is essential to evolve your song further, perhaps 0:54 comes in earlier.

Has a lot of potential mate, work hard on this one ;)
Well done

2.66 / 5.00 (+ 0.57)

i agree its a lil 2 repetative other than that its cool, I think you should sample stairway 2 heaven=D that shit is MADD kick ass oh n turn tables wud help=D anyway good shit
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

Could have done better

It is very repetitive. The piano gets old after a while and its just boring. you just need to change it up a little bit other wise it is nice to listen to. Keep it up.