In my honest opinion...
The original starts out slowly and gradually builds. What you did here was start off with a beat that made no sense to me, and didn't actually get to the song you were remixing until after the first minute. I say get rid of the intro and the little effects, and just basically make a synth pad version of Canon in D. I just don't think this remix does the song justice. Also, make it a bit slower. You have it at what, a little over 120 beats per minute? Make that about 100 beats per minute, it would be better.
Good work though. All that above is my own opinion I guess.
Yeah it is haha, it's called HOUSE, not hiphop, the beat is an intro beat.. but this shit is out of date, so w/e..
Here's a short summary of what I think of the song:
(0.00-0.30) Good, but there's little low end on the kicks.. try processing them using a highpass filter on 'em.. Put the cutoff freq around 50 hz. Voila, they stand out much better. The percussion is a bit on the minimal side for electrohouse.. Try being a bit more original with it, add little bits and pieces here and there. And I don't like the highpassed snare/hatty things. Idk.
(0.30-1.00) The percussion becomes a bit better, but be aware, do not let it get cluttered. I love the sweep.
1.00 and on (I've got to learn for some tests):
-Strings = like
- little effects = ok.
- it is a bit too repetitive. xKore said to me once that should try and add something or progress the song every 8 bars. Try and do that.
All in all, I think that it is a good remix, but to be really honest, I don't really think that this song is good for an electro remix. I'm sure handsup people would dig a remix of this in your usual handsup style.. but I don't know. I'm just not really feeling it.
Alas, sorry if that was a bit harsh, but it is how I feel it. Keep going on it though, blow me away.. if you can ;)
And I'm pretty sure you can;)
Ur not harsh:D Ur honest.. Thanx for liking it, i will try to make it tha best:D
Thnx for ur tips and review! :D