Ehhh, not my thing

Doesn't sound like you put too much effort into it.

The kick is a basic FL stock sample, you should change that because it's really recognizable. People will always think you sound less serious about your work when you use it.

I don't know what to say about the melodies, I think they're just sytrus presets or something, but I don't know for sure so I'm not pointing any fingers.

And add a bassline :P

Keep practicing!

Nice,

short & sweet !
Perfect for a 2 to 4 second section in a game.

Eek.

For a loop, there really wasn't much to this. 3 seconds long is horribly short, and the treble was much too high-pitched. Listening to this for too long gave me a slight headache.