Has soooo much potential!
If you cleaned it up a little better, as in EQ'ing and shit, it'd be really really good. The kick is a bit hard to hear, and the bass kinda drowns out everything (I know it's sorta supposed to, but it does it a bit too much).
The samples and instruments you picked are really good!
Keep it up!
1 and a half thumbs up!
This is pretty good, but I think you could have taken out some of the beginning to progress a little bit faster, but that is all up to the interpretation of the listener. It was also a little bit jerky in some of the transitions from one pattern to another - create some intermediate patterns to keep it from being so sporadic in the changes. Keep it up.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, it definitely isn't really finished i've kinda rushed it a little, and also the beginning is a little bit too long!
Transitions i definitely struggle with, something i really need to work on, hopefully if i have time, i'll try and sort that out!