Has soooo much potential!

If you cleaned it up a little better, as in EQ'ing and shit, it'd be really really good. The kick is a bit hard to hear, and the bass kinda drowns out everything (I know it's sorta supposed to, but it does it a bit too much).

The samples and instruments you picked are really good!

Keep it up!

1 and a half thumbs up!

This is pretty good, but I think you could have taken out some of the beginning to progress a little bit faster, but that is all up to the interpretation of the listener. It was also a little bit jerky in some of the transitions from one pattern to another - create some intermediate patterns to keep it from being so sporadic in the changes. Keep it up.