I love some of the ideas but I think the main problem with the song can be summed up pretty easily. Check out articles on mixing, and learn about 3K theory. It's an audio frequency that the human ear cannot handle. Can't wait to hear your next track!
Thanks for the tips man, and i will check out those articles if i can find them lol
You may think this is harsh but ill do a break down the begining drums areoff a little the whole song lacks the stable amount of backgrounds at 2:50 the trance is completly wrong. it makes no melody it would best be put down lower in volume and used as a background
No offense taken. Thanks for the comment :D