I like it

My only complaint would be that the guitar sounds like it could use some EQing.

Meh... Something's Not Right...

Be very careful with your styles; you've got a slow Jazzy ballad drum line, which is a great take on this song. And taking liberties with tempos is what makes Jazz... Jazz! However, some of your sync notes didn't feel right. Always try to mix what feels right and fluid, don't force it.

I also agree with the below statement; around 00:45 the octaves didn't work. It felt like you ran out of ideas :(

I encourage you to revisit this piece again. It's a creative idea, I just don't think it was executed properly.

Don't give up! Keep at it!

Let's see...

I like this take on the piece, a very beautiful and nostalgic piece for me. I feel there are some tempo issues in there, or at least some things seem a bit... off.

And the part at :45 sounds really empty to me. It sounds like everything is unison, where a little variation in pitch would fill up the space. I'm sure there are some chords and stuff you could use. And the ending isn't really an ending, but I know how difficult it can be to come up with a finish to a song that is only heard in an eternal loop... lol.

Besides that, I like it, and think its a great take on the theme. Clean it up a little and it should sound really good!