Dude, this is pretty good!
In all reality, this is one of the only techno songs that made me move. Very nicely made song. Would you mind if I put this song on my PSP?
Author Comments
Haven't submitted in a while and a friend told me to make a song so i whipped this up in about 3 hours. 100 BPM
Rate and Review fairly. If you dont like, tell me how to improve it. I enjoy criticism - good or bad
<3
Adamaja456 responds:
thanks :)
and of course you can!
<3
Not bad, but this isn't really my style . . .
I'm all for the progressive thing you have going there, but I do think the riff in the beginning needs to be a lot more aggressive . . . Well, overall, the whole song needs to be more aggressive. I just think it needs to pack a lot more punch than it does as it is. The melody should only sound a little louder than the accompanying bass line and counter melodies. Your melodies stick out way too much for my taste. Nice arps though.
Also, the second little riff you had going, I think the second riff you had going on at about 1:16 seemed like it didn't harmonize well with the rest of the song in the last half of it's duration (you know the last half before it loops over) . . .
Good work anyway. You have some good ideas going on here!
Adamaja456 responds:
thank you for the review.
:)
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 1,230
- Downloads
- 64
- Score
- Waiting for 3 more votes
- Uploaded
- Jul 1, 2009
- 11:17 PM EDT
- Genre
- Techno
- File Info
- Song
- 4.2 MB
- 3 min 41 sec
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