No Scent of Perfection

But you did a pretty good job at stating the fact that people who try to teach Abstinence are nothing but stupid, hypocritical puppets who try to brainwash the younger generation.

The script sounded like it needed to be worked on a bit more. It sounded like it was written once and then rewritten only a couple of times. I know you guys were trying to be funny, and that's fine, I smiled at some parts. But if you wanted to be really funny, I suggest you do research on Abstinence and making fun of the infomation you find. That's what I would've done.

Plus, how many people did this with you? I'm asking because all the voices sounded like they were done by a couple of people. I actually have mixed feelings about the voices. They were okay, but they just weren't there yet. It also sounds like you only ran through this a couple of times before recording even started.

I understand that some of this sounds harsh. I'm just stating my opinion. That's all. I do give you an 8 because you made a good effort.

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