I wasn't too happy with my first draft of the theme to my 2d horror game in-the-making [ which you can find as one of my other submissions here]. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't expressing the darkness or hopelessness that I wanted the player to feel. The other one felt like you would ave a chance. I wanted the player to feel as if he was screwed at the beginning. I think I pulled that off quite well in this one myself.
After writing it, I spent a long time making sure the dynamics were no over powering the themes. I also had to add other instruments playing the same thing to add more texture to the sound and help bring out the theme. After I was content, I went back and added some sound effects. I believe this will be the theme. I don't think I'll need to write another draft. I am content. :]