Get better Sounds

I don't want to hate on you man. You got a long way to go. You should look for some better drum sounds and work on your rythms. The lead synth wasn't that bad, it resonated a little too much in the 3.5 Khz range which is actually the most annoying frequency to a human ear. Sorry man. Bring the beef to the table cause all you got here is trimmings. I do wish you luck, however.