I've been in the process of making like 5 songs... all of which are going no where fast. The beginning of this song was part of a techno/trance song I was trying to do (not in piano of course) and I thought it would be good on it's own in something. The rest just kinda came to me and I did this in one sitting. I feel like I got a much richer sound and the guitar seems to be all around you when you listen with some good 'phones. I've never changed any values in the left and right channels before an I messed around with it this time. I think that's what makes it sound so much fuller. Well anyway, I hope you guys like it!
Updated: 7/1/2009 fixed timing a bit and added small changes
Kinda boring...needs some work
The piano riff at the beginning wasn't very compelling.
The synth needs a bit of work all around - it somehow felt off beat with everything.
The blend of styles you had going on was great, although the song really didn't seem to go anywhere with it (aka too much repetition - try some different chords or something? I dunno).
Loads of potential here - I wouldn't recommend multitasking any more or you end up with lots of nothing.
Thank you for the review! These are the kinds that make songs better.
I'm assuming you mean the arpeggio sounds off and if so i agree.
The beginning was to have the sound fx of someone sitting at a piano and flipping some pages before the song began. I just haven't gotten to record or download anything for that yet.
I appreciate that you like the style as that is what this was meant to show. Oh and repetition is a bitch! It always seems to seep into my songs and breed there!
Again I thank you for the honest review and I'm glad that you see potential. Now all I need to do is release it!
WHOA!!!!!
wow this a POWERFUL song i love the bit of rock u added but great work keep it up
Thank you! I always try to make songs that you listen to... not just hear. It's hard to do which is why a lot of people stick to techno trance and house cuz it's sooo superficial. Don't get me wrong I love those types of music and I know how difficult they are to make but I don't like that when the music is over that you feel nothing more than just a bit giddy which soon wears off. I want my music to take you away and then once its over you take away from it. It moves your insides... not your outside.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
TheGraniteDragon 
