This is very nice actually. Not sure why you got eaten on the score.
This is so light and airy. And thse string runs are wonderful. This really is a beautiful song. It has so much quality and texture to it.
All that being said, I think there could definitely be some work done to it. It is a bit short for sure, and lacks some depth. So you could definitely add some other instruments to it and create layers.
4/5 and 7/10 overall. Very good, but not quite great yet. :-)