Uhm?
This is kinda, well, blech. It's not really great. It's okay though. In my opinion, it just seems like it's a bit confusing. I don't think it is structured very well. It sounds as though you merely painted notes at random, rather than making a thoughtful composition. Not to say this is a terrible piece, it's just not excellent. I will admit that I did say "oh snap" at at least 2 parts because it sounded so good, but the whole piece was not awe inspiring. The breakdown at like :50 is sweet. I don't necessarily like that crash sample, change it maybe? That's about it. Good effort, keep it up.
Sound Levels: 8/10
Arrangement: 5/10
Appeal: 6/10
iPixzel 
