Definitely improved from the first version

Clearly better mastering, and some interesting bits of melody you added; also, good job on switching up the piano a bit more. The only thing I would say is that your initial riff (the arpeggio you start with) should definitely stop playing at some point before 2 minutes have passed. Believe me, it'll come back to bite you in the ass when more reviewers weigh in. Plus, even though this version's not too repetitive, people will attack it for being repetitive if they can still hear that same riff you started with all the way through the song.

Nice effects and good job on the harmony. Only other comment I would make is that you could use an interlude or a key change at some point to ease the mood in the song. It might make the sort of "anguishy" feel of the song more apparent if there's a lighter bit to contrast it, you dig?

Nice work; 4/5 9/10.

actually more great than medium-good

and no its not a monotonus repeat of the same melody like the other reviewer said, the melody actually evolves very well throught the song in a uplifting way. great song, Keep uploading, this is nice.

Some advices

Ok. What you will hear in a moment will be some advice. I know that you think this is really good music. But it isn't. The first thing is that you have created some harmony and it is going on and on. No changes. You add new instruments but the base is still the same. Like in techno. It starts from only base drum and it develops itself adding new things. Try to add something different, something surprising. It isn't complete because I can't hear a main motive. Harmony is not a motive. It is just base for melody. There is no characteristic melody. Think about that. 3/10 for idea.