Damn, I'm really likin' this one man.
-Absolutely loved the guitar in this one. Symphonic metal all the way, haha.
-Nice drums as well, although they could've packed a bit more punch.
-Great brass, sounded really good.
-Nice low strings at 30 seconds, some dark choir would've fit well though too.
-I found that the serene intro kinda stuck out from the mood of the rest of the song. The intro should've had the same mood as the rest of the song, kind of like a sinister build-up which starts around 30 seconds. The song could've also started at the 30 second mark to begin with.
-This whole song sounds great but it still feels kind of empty. It needs something more..
Great job here man, I'm really lookin' forward to the finished product of this song. 5/5, peace.