Some good ideas but the start was way too repetative i almost just gave up then the middle kicked in. it wasnt bad you started to build up at 2:08 to 2;20 i was like yeah whats commin next then... BAM what a damn let down!!!!! That build up could have been way better. In all it lacks variety, good idea but i dont htink you quite pulled it off, if you didnt have some ok synths it wouldnt have really been much of a song at all.
yeh tru, u got a point
ive never actually tried a club song im too used to my trance and techno to try a different genre.
but it sounds very good. good use of reverb kick and a gated sequence.
however i have to drop one point because the transitions werent very good. you just dropped all the instruments and went yer whatever lol.
the vocals arent very good either. you hear those sorts of vocals every day. i would actually just prefer there was no vocals.
the hats were a bit gay. try adding some reverb to give them a more ominous feel or even add a phaser or panner (like you did at the beggining)
dont think im saying the song is bad its very good every song has faults im just pointing them out.
overall though not a bad song.
you, got a good point, atm my studio is stuffed, so i'll get right on it when i got it sorted out, thx