check out your proccessors
what is the processor set up you were using to record. the vocals lacked clarity due to way too much reverb and posible miss use of equipment. what mic did you use and how were they recorded cheap mics make it imposible to do anything with vocals. audio technica mb series 4000c great overall recording mic or if you are strapped completely for cash sure 58 can always work if you tweak it enough.
Im still messing with the effects on the vocals. Im uploading a non vocal version of this tommorow.