Not to bad, this is pretty good. Has some of those "good metal moments" but there was also some bad sides.
1: The drum sound quality could be improved, and the beats feature some unrealistically fast double bassing hits. But this isn't a huge factor on enjoyment, just something that could have improved it.
2: I noticed some out of key sounding parts, for example, the note at 1:49, and 2:12.
I notice some real talent in this though! Keep it up.