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I took some advice from branches. You can tell there is still some mistakes, but I put more structure and a little more repitition. I did this one for my friend Devin who wanted me to do lower stuff.
I liked it overall. Please vote and comment :D
Remember your criticism can help me make my stuff that much better :D



not too bad, but you got alot to work on. first off, the whole instrumental track could be alot louder, it's currently completely drowned by the vocals. are you using some sort of software or something to alter your voice by the way? sure sounds like it. and unfortunately it doesn't sound very good. all you need is practise though. the drums sound pretty weak, but with some decent mixing it could probably sound alot better. all in all it's a decent effort, but you could still improve in all areas. keep practising man!

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Nametolong responds:

Well to your surpise I did not use any voice altering software, I'm using my inward screaming the vocals are mine :D
the echo has something to do with me using a rockband mic, and the drums are created using fl stuidos, and the guitar playing is my own,
I've been screaming about a year now and i've play guitar six,
I do admitt I need alot of pratice on the recording and editing haha,
Thanks for your crit! :D_[

some things....cuz you asked! ;)

i really liked the song! except i personally thought the voice could've been backed off just a little bit (just because it's a devil's voice, so it'll most likely stick out anyway), just to create more of a balance.

and also, i think a little more than that cymbal thing for drums. like, i can at least go with a snare...lol

anyway, i do like the idea of the song - properly executed, it could strike fear in peoples' enemies! 7/10, 4/5

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Nametolong responds:

Thank you, I'm releasing an E.P. by the end of summer, and I use newgrounds to upload my mess ups so my friends can see my progress and give me critism. I will try to ease a little on my voice and boost the drums and guitar. :D thank you very much

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4.04 / 5.00

Jun 26, 2009
1:43 PM EDT
Heavy Metal
File Info
2.6 MB
2 min 15 sec

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