not too bad, but you got alot to work on. first off, the whole instrumental track could be alot louder, it's currently completely drowned by the vocals. are you using some sort of software or something to alter your voice by the way? sure sounds like it. and unfortunately it doesn't sound very good. all you need is practise though. the drums sound pretty weak, but with some decent mixing it could probably sound alot better. all in all it's a decent effort, but you could still improve in all areas. keep practising man!
Well to your surpise I did not use any voice altering software, I'm using my inward screaming the vocals are mine :D
the echo has something to do with me using a rockband mic, and the drums are created using fl stuidos, and the guitar playing is my own,
I've been screaming about a year now and i've play guitar six,
I do admitt I need alot of pratice on the recording and editing haha,
Thanks for your crit! :D_[
some things....cuz you asked! ;)
i really liked the song! except i personally thought the voice could've been backed off just a little bit (just because it's a devil's voice, so it'll most likely stick out anyway), just to create more of a balance.
and also, i think a little more than that cymbal thing for drums. like, i can at least go with a snare...lol
anyway, i do like the idea of the song - properly executed, it could strike fear in peoples' enemies! 7/10, 4/5
Thank you, I'm releasing an E.P. by the end of summer, and I use newgrounds to upload my mess ups so my friends can see my progress and give me critism. I will try to ease a little on my voice and boost the drums and guitar. :D thank you very much