Since you've got so much potential...
...I think I'll be a bit more of a critic today. Don't get me wrong, I'm doing it just to be helpful. If I made a mistake, diss me all you like ^o^.
Ok, here goes:
I wasn't too sure whether that static-sound in the background was rainfall or not, but it didn't sound too good (it wasn't well defined). It also seems to pan alot, which made me a bit distracted from 0:05-0:58.
The note at 0:49 didn't sound too well (it seems as if you "stumbled" at that point).
The pause at 1:04 is one second off. It starts three beats after the previous melody ends. It almost seems as if you decided to play a different song.
It seems like you stumbled again from 1:17-1:19. I might be terribly wrong, though.
From 2:58-3:00 there's something strange going on after one of the ghost notes. Perhaps you missed a ghost note?
3:08-3:11 didn't sound too perfect.
...I think that's it for the -ve criticism.
The praises ^__^:
The overall song is fantastic (not a surprise). The "autumn-mood" you cast in your songs is always there, but this time it's more of an "end-of-summer-rain". Very nice.
3:29 was perfectly on-beat
4:14 had some amazing arpeggios.
The mood is very solitary and gloomy and is similar to a Goo Goo Dolls style song from 3:30-end (reminds me a bit of "Iris" and "Name" combined), which I love ^_^.
All those little arpeggios, slides and string bends were some really good ear-candy for me. Kudos.
Thanks once more with your contributions. They're much appreciated.
Cheers.
4/5
8/10 <------------ saving the 9's and 10's for your future submittions ^__^