I don't mean for this to be too disheartening, bit the recurring riff from the beginning is basically ripped straight from Super Mario world's castle theme. Also, the drums seam a bit crazy, punctuating almost every note. Try to take a more reserved approach next time.
Despite all this, i have heard much worse on NG. If you need to riase your spirits a bit, listen to Bop Be Bop. It's.... hilariously bad.
Thanks Ive been putting music on here for a while and the only time people comment is when they have something good to say I have other songs that people blammed without telling me why but anywho this is just incoherent bullshit this song is. I didn't mean for it to be review seriously but thanks