Melody is pretty good. A little syncopated at times, in other words, hard to follow, but the notes are really good. It needs a faster drum rythm though, with different drums, and maybe some electronic effects. If you need any send me a PM, and I'll make some for you :). Anyway, overall it's pretty good, you should continue it. The pace is quite good for techno, just add a decent bass, some more and louder percussion, some effects, make it longer, and you've got a 5 star techno submission. Good luck with it :)
thanks, yeah, i really dont have many good bass kicks, theyre mostly for rock and stuff so i just used a subbass for the beat. :P
dang, ya know what, it still says i can't send you a PM...
it still says the same thing.
Wow, for a beginner, this is top quality! Other than the fact that I, personally, would like to see a longer version with more sounds in it, this is really nice!