Hmmm maybe its just me....
I'd have loved it if about 1:39-1:41 just a breakdown and screaming lyrics for the next 30 seconds but i think its a good song
dont ever appologize
music is an expression of how YOU feel. it shouldnt matter if you wrote the song to get approval from others, or if you wrote it cuz you wanted to. one thing you might consider is voice lessons. ive been a music boy all my life, so i never thought i needed voice lessons, turns out though, they helped improve my signing by pointing out things i didnt know i was doing wrong. just something to think about.
nice song though, look forward to more
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