A sooting melody
The lyrics were what I enjoyed the most about this song, and I found the voice to fit very well with the piece as a whole.
The static at the end was shocking to say the least, and wasn't entirely welcome listening to the rest of the song before it.
Overall, an excellent piece of music.
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Thanks, I too like lyrics that are completely random. Sorry for the static. It's horrible when listening with headphones!
I liked the overall sound of this song, it was very relaxing and calm. The lyrics, although completely nonsensical, fitted, and were kinda funny. The actual voice was kinda annoying, but nothing too bad. There's not really much else I can say, but you should try make it longer and add some interesting solo.
That static at the end it horrible. Why is it in there? It pretty much ruins the whole song..
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Thanks for the review! The static appeared when I converted it from .aiff to mp3. Dunno why it appears.
I think that this piece is almost there - a few tweaks in the timing for the chord, but other than that, it isn't too bad. You also need to lose that horrible bit of static at the end of the track - it's quite a wake up call, to be honest.
It's quite mellow, but there is certainly a spark of passion within the track itself. Adding additional chords could make it more dynamic, but I'd instead recommend that you go the route of including more variation, through other instruments - a muted trumpet solo would be nice, for example, as it's just a backing instrument at present.
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Thanks for reviewing! Well, the only instrument I play is guitar, and it's always hard to add other intruments becouse I'm not so good with notes and what all the tones and chords are called. When I add other stuff like strings and so on, I just try and listen if it fits, I don't, you know, like: "Well, thats a E- major# so I could do this and that". I just listen. Hope you get it... :D
Good job with this one man, really liked it. My favorite thing about this song would have to be the lyrics, which flowed nicely and sounded great when sung a group of talented female singers, good job with that.
The beat was good here, pretty soft since it was played behind the vocals, good job with that.
The melody was good, very catchy and sounded graet when coupled with the singing, good job with that.
The only thing that I didnt like about this song was the static at the end, which scared the daylights out of me, try and clean up the track a little more next time to prevent that from happening.
Good job here man, 5/5 from me, keep up the good work! :D
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Actually, there are no female singers, just me. :D
Sorry for the static, it appeared when I converted the song. Thanks for the review!
Hmm not too bad at all.
The song itself was pretty catchy. Something I was nodding my head along to while listening to. The vocals themselves actually seemed kind of hard to understand. To be honest I don't think I would consider hardly any of it without the lyrics being written down in the author comments.
The area in the middle of the song between the vocals might have gotten a bit too quiet. I know you were doing that more on purpose, but a little bit more going on would have made it better in my opinion.
Woah, the static in the end almost knocked me out of my chair. I really didn't see that coming at all. O.o Something that should be fixed for sure if at all possible.
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You were headbanging to my song? COOL!! Sorry for the static. It's horrible when listening with headphones, right? Thanks for reviewing!