The trance leaves after a while then comes back but you lose some points on orginality. Keep on trying!
This song could be a good trance song
...but this isn't it. It sounds like MIDI.
Use a better version of FruityLoops or whatever or upgrade your instruments and you'll have at least a 6 song.
I'm trying to find better samplers because all the ones in Fruity Loops now seem overused, so if you could kindly point in the direction of better samplers, that would be wonderful. If not, well thanks for the tip.
I like it, it's just that this song doesn't really go well with the trance style. Overall good job though.
Hey, I tried =\
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.