The guy below me is a complete dick, but the vocal's weren't the greatest. Mainly the singing, the screaming was decent. Quality of the vocals could've been better too, but eh not everyone has good equipment so i wont take any points off for that.
You should do some compressing on the vocals to even out the volume and maybe touch up the screaming with a little reverb. I didn't like the effects on the parts that you were singing, it just sounded kinda weird. I'd just redo the singing without any effects. Also you should delete any feedback from your mic, like in the beggining, when you arn't singing or screaming.
Other than that, the overall track sounds pretty good, and the instruments are MORE than just decent.
so overall, 4/5
That was just....
horrible. I am sorry, but it was no better than a 14 year old screaming at a microphone. Frankly all the lyrics were horrible but at least the instruments were OK. Shame they were ruined by dodgy singing