a little dry
First of all, good job doing a little benassi style.
However, the fact that you only use one bass through out the entire song is a little ridiculous. Using a little accompaniment, some pads, and also more variation on the bass would be good. Look up some articles on drum and bass. Although they're not what you were going for, it will give you the skills to change things up a little and add that bit of variation and punch to your song.
Keep it up. Its the only way you improve.
Your first 5
Well as your first 5 and 10, my suggestions for improvement upon it are.. try to add some more personal variances, it's very good for what you were aiming for, but to get it to be something very unique, it need a unique change-up.
:) keep it up!
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