Very repetitive, and a little boring overall.
The percussion was very good, but I wish it'd change in some parts in the song. All I heard were slightly different kicks happening rarely, and some cymbals coming in after. The percussion was a little too loud, and in my opinion, the song is a little like copy and paste throughout. You should soften the drums, vary them, and add another few instruments with different melodies so it won't get too dull. Plus, the song is quite long, and it's doing almost the same thing for the whole song, so it wouldn't hurt to shorten it. You should add some effects too. Anyway, overall, it's a good start to the song, so you should continue it. Good luck finishing it!
Oh man! even though the intro was great, it felt repetitive i don't know why...
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