Hello, new artist.
Let me point out my opinions.
Good choice of instruments and melodies
Nice drum sounds (most)
I kept my review vague, because I believe that all artists find their own style. So, I say don't take too much criticism or inspiration. -KN
Thanks a lot. Your review made me glad for these 2 reasons:
1: You liked my melody. I didn't think people would really enjoy this style of music.
2: you pointed out that I am missing a breakdown, I realized that while mixing down the song :(
I appreciate your review!
I like it!
Very good overall and nice beat but it could do with a little more bass! The melody has grown on me! It feels a little empty to be honest but I'm sure you could fill it!
Noice second trakc!
Nice job man
When you showed this to me last night I thought it was choppy. It sounds pretty good. I'll give a 10 for effort + the extremly fast learning. Melody is nice and jumpy, but it needs variety... And the bass should change more often. Also, the ending isn't very good. You should, rather than add that pre-made arp, make one that better matches the melody and your instruments. The ending arp ruined the track a bit, it made it sound a tad generic.
I could move to this though, and dance is dance.
Thanks man, I'm working on improving as fast as I can haha. It's hard :\ hopefully when I get my keyboard next week I'll get to making some better quality stuff. Thanks for checking!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.