I see the "House" influences...but...uhh...I think you may be trying a bit too hard. (or not hard enough)
I like it!
This is a very good/Nice song! thx! i like it!
I don't know what everyones saying
I really love the sound in the beginning, its gritty and makes me want to do something violent.
Great song..and good luck with the living situation.
I agree with iQuote, sounds like you didn't even try to make a melody or use decent-sounding notes. Towards the end, it got a little better, but this type of tune is better suited as a back-track to something else in my opinion.
i didnt really like it.... it was too... noisy?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.