Not really sure..
Not a huge fan of the voice, it didn't really fit in well with the track. The tune was good and catchy. You've got the panning right, didn't sound uncomfortably mono like a lot of other tracks. Also there was clashing beats at the 1 minute mark, that sounded dreadful, you needed to cut that up better. The whole thing sounded a bit flat, do some more equalizing. I don't like leaving harsh sounding reviews, but knowing where you went wrong is how you improve :) Not that I am much better anyway. Well done!
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