Sounded a little dry at the begining and the hats needed something or perhaps a different sample altogether. Once this track gets rolling though it sounds completely bad ass. Nice work.
You need a different hihat sound. It sounds way too...well...like it was taken out of the fl studio section. in fact, this entire thing sounds like the samples were taken right out of FL studio....but whatever...gotta start somewhere i guess. Not a bad tune though, the guitar in the left needed to be WAY toned down. Just got really annoying after a while. Could use a lot of improvment, but not bad at all
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