i like it
like the last guy said its pretty much just mushed in there. besides that its a piece of work
I don't want to be to critical but you should have seriously adjust all levels before posting it.
the melody and everything would be so much clearer and the bass would be really exciting.
Sorry i can only give you a 4 for your effort.
work it over and I'm sure you could land a high score with this song.
I tried to Balance everything out, thank you for the advice