The song itself is fairly good but I would have to definitely say that it does not sound like it is finished let alone remixed. I guess the problem for me is that the sounds just seem to plain and I think you could achieve a much nicer sound if you chose better sounding instruments and did a bit of tweeking. Overall not bad and as it is your first song you have plenty of improving to do. Not bad, keep on improving. Ill be looking back for more.
Well, this isn't my first song, I mean, this is a remix of my first song, I was messing around with FL studio because I was super bored, and I decided just to remix the first song I ever made. In the process, I feel like I may have screwed something up somewhere.