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[LK] Paradise [WiP]

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This is a new song i am working on, not done at all, and still a bunch of things wrong with it.

Please leave some critisicm because im stuck.

Please rate/review

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Hm...

This sounds like a faster version of "You're my Angel".

Inspiration from there?

Meh, it's still good =D

LK412 responds:

Not rly

Thanks a lot!

Cool..

Nice kick! The melody really feels like paradise. meh. well, the only things you could add are some extra soundeffects, fix the drums at 0/50, drop, strings, mod bend over time at the lead, then make a second part for the lead and repeat it with the strings still on. Something like that. Thing. Cougwhip.

LK412 responds:

Thanks for the review, but im done with this song.

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@:50 the percussion didnt really sound that good. other than that, its great :)

LK412 responds:

Yea, ill fix that. thanks for the review.

Dance

Reminds me of one of the songs from Platform Racing 2.
I don't listen to much dance.

Criticism:
Make it longer. That's it.

You are probably stuck because it's a complete song (except for the length)
That's all I can tell that needs improved.

LK412 responds:

I can cuz im stuck, its not really complete cuz its short, and could have a lot of improvements.

Awesome!

Hey guy, do us a favor and do a complete song of 3 minutes or something please, I just love this song, is Awesome!!

Keep the work, you're a genius at music!

LK412 responds:

:D Thank you

Credits & Info

LK412
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Faves:
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Downloads
154
Votes
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Score
4.69 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 20, 2009
8:03 PM EDT
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
2.8 MB
1 min 13 sec

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