Default Sounds O My!
I think that the actual song concept is not bad at all,
but using the default sounds like that makes it some what
hard to listen to. I think that you could make this song
sound twice as good if you chose better sounds/instruments
and used the mixer to polish the song up.
Hoping to hear a mastered version in the future :)
I suggest you download some plugins! what program are you using?
depending on which one you're using I can probably give you a lot of helpful tips to make this sound way better
Im using fl8... jess pliz give me tips ^^