Its good, a few touches but not many
its good but the original tops it along with a few other remixes. Add a little more impact to the listener with some bass and make it just a touch louder, but not so much that it will hurt the listeners ears. Its a good remix tho... I also would probibly not set the main melody to be played with an electric gutar, electric piano ya but not gutar as it muffles itself far too easily.
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