sounds good but...

*you used some interesting beats in here that I rarely hear anywhere, so kudos on that.

the track is really repeatative, you should think about adding more to the song like a choir chant and piano beats to compliment the feel of your song. and I would seriously get rid of that beat that you put in on 1:45. that beat through me off so much that I almost got the impression of a house track instead of a trance mix. if at all possible vocals would be awesome to hear too. I'm just talking about a few lines thrown in the song to help the feel of the track.

I hope this review helps you in any way, and thank YOU for contacting me personally for it. I look forward to watching you grow in your skills as an artist.

*{ artists take criticism::bitches take provocation} X)