The kick is too loud. Distorts the sounds A LOT. The melody isnt that bad but right now it isnt dance-y....more of like a traveling song. So speed up the BPM if ya wanted it to be dance-y. THen just change some of the drums they are a bit annoying. (Just the sounds not the actual way they are done)
Then just either shorten it or change it up a bit. Because its the same melody non-stop the entire way through. So change it up, add a counter melody, whatever.
So change all that and it would be an 8 or 9 depending on how its done. until then....
I think it is pretty good. It could be a little better but I really can't explain how. :| Maybe making it have a faster beat will make it sound better but I'm not sure. Anyway, good job.
Hey thanks.... I knew there was something missing i just wasnt sure.... But yea i agree it could be a little faster and maybe second beat added. Anyway thank you very much for letting me know instead of just voting on it...... Check Back in about a day or so and i may have updated it.
THANKS!! =) Bump Da Beet
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