this is some real nice stuff
I was just going through a whole heep of new songs for newgrounds, nearly all of them
where nooby lol but then i came across this one and it put a smile on my dile :D:D
the song doesnt really have that much of a build and it doesnt go for very long either.
the equing is a bit rushed and could do with some stronger reverb
the melody was nice and u do have some good content their. MORE PRACTICE lol
hmm its cool that u recorded. The sound is a bit scratchy tho
the into is offputting because it is quite repeditive.
I think you need some more practice.
you will start to make some good songs after your 10, to your 15 or even 20th song
so dont give up if u get some bad reviews. I know i have got some bad reviews lol :D
well anyway, hope you got something outa that. Listen to my beat now lol