As I Listen.
Pretty relaxed piece so far man, I'm enjoying it!
The lead synth I have a small problem with, not defined enough, or overdefined I'm not really sure, probably just a personal problem.
Everything seems nicely mastered and eqed man.. credits to you there ^^.
Woah love 1:14 that was awesome just loved that transition for some reason.
My main problem so far is probably that all the instruments seem slightly repetitive and just come in and out, but that is the problem with most music at this day and age.
I love the modulation effect you have going with the main lead that comes in about 1:55? That's really cool, however you should try (if you havn't) doing a full modulation effect then a crash into the main voice of that lead again. Instead of repeating at that particular modulation for awhile.
Nice ending man, very cleverly laid out, almost a perfect piece, I personally think that the intro might also need some work, as it does not really exactly foreshadow the piece very well and seems slightly out of place, but it fixes itself as the song goes on.
Anyway keep it up, hope to hear some more of your stuff!
~Happy Music Making -Squll