The things with video game music, is that it keeps within it's set theme. In your intro, I felt like I was being lulled into an energetic song, which then moved into a slightly relaxed theme, to a mildly energetic one. If it kept, you'd earn a lot more. Simply, great bass, a nice simple guitar, and a good background tapping made it quite a nice relaxing song if not used for a video game. Nicely done.
But, I think you should have lowered the levels on it, its maxing out. =/ Try to add effects like multiband compressors and other effects to get a more clean sound. It is very distorted and is kind of hard to listen to. Try re uploading it after you do some of that.