Im getting nice dark feelings from this... All I suggest is not using presets... Try downloading some VSTs (theres plenty of free ones), they are lots of fun and much better quality. Also, the drums need to change. They at least need to differ at points rather than being the same pattern throughout the song.
Overall this is a good song.
I gave you a 5/5 :)
Thanks, I have been looking into some VST's. Hopefully I can find some that will meet my purposes.