Stick some percussion in....
and you got a kick-ass trance song!
This has an awesome sound to it. Very techno-ish. Try adding other sounds with it too, and this might sound really great.
Keep it up!
4/5 & 9/10
Should name it: Fresh Start
Playing with sequencers is a good thing altough it's quite basic. I see you used them in the intro, streching a whole bar won't help you learn stuff. But I liked it in which order you putted them, it tells me you have rythm and a good feeling for music. Next time please try to create one your own. Just delay a lead allot and use a little bit reeverb.
I liked the melody you created, only it could be a little bit complexer. Try creating a bassline under it, and some sub notes above that just makes a melody really nice. I like the arp (as the melody itself). Could've used a little bit more power.
Lol you got to tell me how you did that effect at 0:24, I used to know it but I forgot. :D probably some sweep effect? :P
Just some other information, All I heared was a intro with a main melody and no breakdowns/build-ups nor a ending.
This is the order you made it: intro>Main>Fade out
This is the basic order is should be:
Intro>Build-up to the melody>Main>Extra build(positive one)>Breakdown>Ending.
And even then there's enough more extra's to get it filled.
I am not trying to piss you of with this review, I am only trying to give you a basic constructive review with some critism in my point of view.
Oh and yeah most important, I missed a beat! Kicks/cymbals/claps/snares.
nonetheless a good effort, I deffinately think you learned something when creating this song. It's a fresh start for you with this new plugin. ;)
The reason i dont have a breakdown is cuz its a wip. also i didnt improve the song . and the FX was something from Vanguard that i added in. i only used Vanguard. the melody wasnt complex though i couldnt think of how i could improve the melody . and then again with bassline i didnt creat it . Its a wip thats why i dont have the breakdown and stuff. I stretched the whole bar because i think it sounded better same goes for the order of the arp ;D. I did not add any filters . . I also have got no good kicks so i didnt add them in. Plus i am not very good with drum loops :P XD. there is no kicks in Vanguard i dont think. i wont continue it though. so i guess u can call it a loop anyways. thanks for the review. and the 8 including the 5. I will try to make more songs in the future. ;D
Sounds pretty cool. Has a decent melody you could work off of. Does sound trance-like for sure. You should definitely work on this. Adding a lot of sub-sounds, like hi-hats, and weird ambient sounds. Check out my newest songs! :D
Thanks for the review! ill chek out your songs